What is the best fan fiction you've ever read?

Plot Intro:

Ever since the young realm of earth’s first morning, it has been the battleground for Heaven and Hades wars; countless humans have suffered at the bickering of those greater beings.
From these great wars many items crafted by the skill of Angel’s were left, forgotten and overlooked, their powers hidden in the benign form of earthly products, their once great power lost as the power of Faith began to fail on Earth.
But now, as Hades stirs the Heavens lay dormant. It is down to those chosen, those that have found these ancient artifacts and managed to synchronise their own Faith with them to defend their realm against the invading forces, the time of Angel Relics has arrived, the time of the Kamujin.

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My manga A Vampires Soul has an updated Plot summary as well as more characters with abilities I'm hoping to get some feedback for.

Story concept

Since ancient times mankind has understood that by injecting women who were in-between 2 and 5 months pregnant with the blood of a female animal that you could affect her babies’ development. It is believed this was first discovered when people witnessed abnormalities in babies when their mother was bitten by an animal around the midsection months before giving birth. Once a baby grows into adulthood carrying the animal trait they can pass it on to their children, but the trait will weaken and gradually ware out in two or three generations. There is only one way to make sure your children carry the trait and that is to breed with another animal like human. It was this discovery that sparked the creation of clans nearly six thousand years ago; super cells of humans with similar animal traits. The clans span the entire globe with sections in most major cities.

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Well I've been thinking about writing a story for some time now and so I started writing, my story isn't centered around any particular time period, you can think of it as being set in like a final fantasy world, well anyways the main character is a guy named Leandros he is about 18 years old he had a very rough childhood, he witnessed his mother being murdered by his own father(he was really trying to kill Leandros but his mother died protecting him). Leandros was left all alone at a very early age, after that he was on the run because his father(Nathan) ran an organization that wouldn't stop hunting Leandros down, he never knew why his father wanted him dead until one day Leandros ran out of luck because one of his father's men had him cornered and it seemed as if Leandros was going to die until a mysterious man saved him from being killed after Leandros was rescued the man told him that his name was Amon and that Leandros was a "Kronos Child" just like him and that was the reason he was being chased. A "Kronos Child" is someone born with the blood of Kronos, the father of the gods and so they posses a great amount of "essence"(spiritual power that no normal human can harness). Amon takes in Leandros and soon Leandros discovers that this man is the leader of an underground resistance group that is fighting his father's organization. The organization is filled with people just like him. The organization's main goal is to capture all "Kronos Children" and the resistance group were created to stop them. Leandros, after being trained is sent with another "Kronos Child" named Noel(The two have become close friends over the years)to locate "Kronos Children" before the organization does. Leandros and Noel are very different Noel is a very social person that likes to joke around while Leandros is more anti-social and is serious, it takes a long time for him to put trust or to open up with people. Noel is around the same age as Leandros and they joined around the same time. Now I'm going to explain the characters a little better.

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Yami no Hikari: Anraaki Rabaa - Light of the Darkness: Unlucky Lover.

Inspiration: The three anime; AIR, Kanon, and Clannad (which were, originally, visual novels/H-games/Dating Sims before they became anime/manga). Can't forget the game, Harvest Moon, either, which sparked the harem idea more and gave me the idea of the love rivals (love rivals being guys in here) who challenge the main guy for the girls' affections.

Summary: It seems that everyone in the group has love issues. Throw in girls who can't seem to get a guy with their personalities while the love rivals, having love issues of their own, challenge the main guy if he were to have affection for one of the five girls. And also... How can you know somebody from a long time ago when you never knew them at all or, at least, don't remember them? Prophecies have been made and are also about to come true... And the web of Fate continues to weave...

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Well... Here's the first story I submitted to an agent... When I started writing it, I had some misgivings about it since I'm a christian and all. And what many readers would think of it. Surprisingly enough though, some people liked it, but... It's the religious nuts I'm rather leery of. I figure they may overlook the storyline, and just call me a heathen or Satan Worshiper. Or Since the main character is destined to be the "Anti- Christ," I may be precieved as naive, or ignorant of the truth. Or the biggest thing is, "I may be under the devil's influences!" Those thoughts bother me as I write the second book, but in any case here's the storyline:

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Hello folks, I'm just happy to announce that I've just released my second chapter of my manga & novel. This chapter took me a hell of a time to write and brainstorm everything about it as good as possible. Please go to my blog ( the link is below ) and read it and let me know what you think. Thank you in Advance.

http://nabolion.blogspot.com/

Baby - Lon: Chapter 2 - Lost and Found

Page 1

Panel 1: Aslan is standing over the corpses of his family. He's standing outside in the rain shaking and wetting his pants.

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As an answer to the title of my post the logical answer would be comics but this is where I mess up. I can organize the scenes and the images and the dialouge in my head panel by panel. If I have this great story idea and try to put it panel form I just hit a blank and don't know how to break it down. Any ideas?