Actually, some of us here on Manga Punk are very proficient writers. Just hit us with what you've got. We'd be glad to help. ;)

That would be great. ill private you with one of my short stories, thanks forthe feedback

That's what I needed to say, and I said it!

No problem, PL; but I also suggest that you post the story on the forum as well. Feedback from multiple people could prove useful. ;)

Yes, thats very true. And plus many of us have killed cats in the past, and I'm just curious to read it.

man i'm a RETARD!!! o anime punk joey please private message me that story that i sent you then iwill post it on here. thanks

That's what I needed to say, and I said it!

wow i'm an idiot, scratch what i said just a second ago, i was thinking of a different story
I'll put some of my story on here some time

That's what I needed to say, and I said it!

You can also try deviantart as a larger place to post your work and get feedback. (Deviantart is what I use frequently for my authorings.) Don't worry - none of the Mangapunks bite.

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.:"No time for goodbyes," he said, as he faded away. "It's hard to imagine, but one day you'll end up like me." Then he said, "If you want to stay alive, hold on for your life.":.

That's what I needed to say, and I said it!

Ooh, I can help even if you don't need it anymore.
Maby you could post it on....what was it?....(memory loading)....Myspace thats it! If you don't have that useless crap, all I can think of with my excuse for a brain is post it here, on MP.

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