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My Manga premise: Kamujin

Writing ChainGrave - Monday, May 19, 2008 - 19:11

Plot Intro:

Ever since the young realm of earth’s first morning, it has been the battleground for Heaven and Hades wars; countless humans have suffered at the bickering of those greater beings.
From these great wars many items crafted by the skill of Angel’s were left, forgotten and overlooked, their powers hidden in the benign form of earthly products, their once great power lost as the power of Faith began to fail on Earth.
But now, as Hades stirs the Heavens lay dormant. It is down to those chosen, those that have found these ancient artifacts and managed to synchronise their own Faith with them to defend their realm against the invading forces, the time of Angel Relics has arrived, the time of the Kamujin.

Angel Relics:

Weapons Equipment, Tools or even reminders of fallen comrades. They are what the Angelic host left behind in the “War of the Fallen” and the “Nephilim Purge”. They react with the “Faith” power of certain individuals, only these individuals with large reservoirs of “Faith” can synchronise with Relics and utilise them to their full potential.

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It seems that you are

killijoy; Tuesday, May 20, 2008 - 16:21

It seems that you are setting up a role play more than an actual storyline. May I ask, what exactly, is the story? There are many directions you could take that in, just curious as to which path you feel is yours.

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I have to agree with

quamp; Thursday, May 22, 2008 - 23:07

I have to agree with Killjoy; this sounds more like an RPG than a manga premise.

In addition, what is the title about? I looked it up in a Japanese dictionary and couldn't find it. I could find kamu jin, which loosely translates to "blow your nose compassionately." Your description lacks specific characters, points of plot conflict, and a sense of direction.

In other words, we need more information.

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