I have a plot I've been working on for a little while, and I would like people to help out on it. I'm setting it up a bit like a role-play, as that is what makes it easy to me. Erego:
==-MISS MURDER-==
Characters:
Anette
Nickname: Miss Murder
Age: 10
She can turn sinful people into dolls, through a gruesome process of torturing them, killing them and grinding their bones (literally). No one is safe, as even mispronouncing her name is the deadliest of sins. She enjoys playing with these grotesque dolls, as she feels it is her reward. She's the daughter of a rich family, but is kept seperate from her Mom, Dad, sister and brother. She is given all she wants - doll parts, clothes, books - as long as she stays away from the family. She has her own butler, whom she loves, and has previously had five governesses. She is incredibly intelligent and very detached, although her moods affect her actions greatly. She carries a little black book with her symbol on the cover.
Madamoiselle Angele
Age: 16
Anette's new governess whom Anette loves greatly. She knows there's something "peculiar" with Anette, but is wise enough not to question. She is planning on marrying Anette's butler, whom she knows all ready from the slums. She is soft-spoken, but strongly opinioned and carries a gently ferocious strength with her. She loves poetry and Anette.
Daniel
Age: 17
The regular butler's younger son, he attends the nursery as a private butler to ensure the seperation of the two households. He is very fond of Anette, and serves her all the best items from the kitchen. He loves Angela, however, and is blissfully unaware of Anette's passion for him, and he will come to suffer for it. He's extremely well-mannered, but firm.
-Setting-
19th century England, in London in a huge manor. There's a nursery, bedroom, and doll room for Anette. There's a shared bedroom for Angele and Daniel.
-Story-
Angele was called in after Anette's fifth governess disappeared, on the recommendation of her fiancee who is Anette's butler. Anette has kept her secrets hidden, but trusts Angele and the secret begins slipping out. As soon as she wants to tell Angele her twisted secret, she finds that Daniel the butler and Angele have been engaged. Enfuriated that both did not adhere to her wishes, she decides that instead of TELLING Angele, she'd much rather SHOW her, in an effort to keep her governess with her forever...
-The Dolls-
Each doll is assigned to a deadly sin, but they may not always 'correspond' to the crime. They are beautiful dolls, but there's the mark, and always something wrong - a toe missing, an eye missing, a finger missing, an extra thumb, etc.... They do nothing but rot in their fiery prisons.
That seems to cover it thus far, I think. Suggestions, comments?
.:suzu-chan/killijoy/Joeys Cupcake:.
.:"No time for goodbyes," he said, as he faded away. "It's hard to imagine, but one day you'll end up like me." Then he said, "If you want to stay alive, hold on for your life.":.
