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Writing Mist - Thursday, April 3, 2008 - 18:46

Well I've been thinking about writing a story for some time now and so I started writing, my story isn't centered around any particular time period, you can think of it as being set in like a final fantasy world, well anyways the main character is a guy named Leandros he is about 18 years old he had a very rough childhood, he witnessed his mother being murdered by his own father(he was really trying to kill Leandros but his mother died protecting him). Leandros was left all alone at a very early age, after that he was on the run because his father(Nathan) ran an organization that wouldn't stop hunting Leandros down, he never knew why his father wanted him dead until one day Leandros ran out of luck because one of his father's men had him cornered and it seemed as if Leandros was going to die until a mysterious man saved him from being killed after Leandros was rescued the man told him that his name was Amon and that Leandros was a "Kronos Child" just like him and that was the reason he was being chased. A "Kronos Child" is someone born with the blood of Kronos, the father of the gods and so they posses a great amount of "essence"(spiritual power that no normal human can harness). Amon takes in Leandros and soon Leandros discovers that this man is the leader of an underground resistance group that is fighting his father's organization. The organization is filled with people just like him. The organization's main goal is to capture all "Kronos Children" and the resistance group were created to stop them. Leandros, after being trained is sent with another "Kronos Child" named Noel(The two have become close friends over the years)to locate "Kronos Children" before the organization does. Leandros and Noel are very different Noel is a very social person that likes to joke around while Leandros is more anti-social and is serious, it takes a long time for him to put trust or to open up with people. Noel is around the same age as Leandros and they joined around the same time. Now I'm going to explain the characters a little better.

Noel: His family and friends from his hometown were massacred by a man named Juventas. Noel was very close to him, but know hates him and wants to avenge those who were close to him. Noel jokes around to hide his feelings and his past.

Hero: One of the "Kronos Children" Noel and Leandros search for is Hero. Hero is a 17 year old girl who ends up liking Leandros after they rescue her from being captured by the organization.

Nathan: He is the father of Leandros and is in charge of the organization in the western part(Acheron) of the stories world there are 4 sections of the organization. Nathan is also a "Kronos Child" he is known as the "Death God". The organization also known as Scaena tricks the public into thinking that they are a legit business, they supply the world with a natural resource know as "Anima" no one knows how they obtain anima. Anima is like oil, it has helped cause a lot of technological advances.

Amon: He is the leader of the resistance group know as MYTH, Amon is the master of air. He is known throughout the world as the "hidden one" because he moves so quickly.

Juventas: A member of Lethe(east section of Scaena) he was close to Noel a long time ago, he saw him like the son he lost. He has the power to control time but he isn't able to go back in time. He thinks by joining Scaena he can find a way to bring back his dead son.

Kronos Child: They all have different abilities ex. some control time and others air or fire.

Well I have more characters that I would mention but if I did that I would ruin the story oh yeah I couldn't think up a name for this story so if you think you could come up with a good name I would appreciate that and if you would like to help me you can because I'm not that good at drawing and I kinda know what to do with the main plot but there are times when I can't think of what to write.

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Possible Suggestions

Ren-chancrusade; Thursday, April 3, 2008 - 21:12

How about Kronos Children?
Or Kronos
Or MYTH
Or Child
or Leandros

Intresting story plot.

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oh i forgot to mention

Ren-chancrusade; Friday, April 4, 2008 - 10:52

I'd be intreseted in helping you out. I'm a bit busy right now but, i could squeeze in a little time (summer would probably be best for me)

"Amor, amor, nada hay peor ni mejor" -proverbio

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It sounds like you're taking

killijoy; Friday, April 4, 2008 - 11:35

It sounds like you're taking from a lot of different manga, but as far as I can tell, you're making it your own. Very cool. Congrats.

I see a little Godchild, a little +ANIMA, a little...

Ummsers, how about Kronos Child? Although the actual god of time was "Chronos" with a Ch. I don't know if that was purposely done or what, but still very cool.

GOOD LUCK!

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Sure

Mist; Saturday, April 5, 2008 - 06:57

Yeah any help would be appreciated, oh yeah I did change the Ch into K and its funny you mention that because the leaders of the organization are known as "Titans", there are twelve of these "Titans", three in each section, north, south, east and west(Nathan being one of them).

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help

Ren-chancrusade; Saturday, April 5, 2008 - 22:21

Okay then...what would you like me to do? I'm willing to draw, but i'm a self-taught artist (self-taught= little anatomy traning). I'd be happy to post some sample drawings of a character if you'd like.

"Amor, amor, nada hay peor ni mejor" -proverbio

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Wow to me this is amazing...

Kurenai Ichi; Saturday, April 5, 2008 - 23:57

Wow to me this is amazing, I havnt seen anything this creative by someone who wasnt already published. thank you for posting it here ^_^
Someone here may remember this..
For a couple of months or maybe just a month.. I was writing a story verry similar to this titled 'First Born', only I involved more religion into it.. Which made it so complicated that my brain became foggy and I just had to quit..
But if you would like I still have some old things written somewhere you could leech off of, im not quite sure if i'll ever use them again but if I did, it would probably be in a video game somewhere.. But mainly it was the same, with the organization and the abilities of people that arn't normal.. Interested?

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Interesting. Reminds me of

Joamette Gil; Sunday, April 6, 2008 - 16:38

Interesting. Reminds me of Harry Potter and +Anime. I'd probably read it.

"Kronos Child" sounds good to me.

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Thanks

Mist; Monday, April 7, 2008 - 17:59

If you want you can email me at and I'm glad you guys like my story and if you'd like you can give me some ideas, it might take me some time to view my mail so I might not respond right away.

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Kronos Child

Kurenai Ichi; Monday, April 7, 2008 - 21:34

I second that motion on Kronos Child ^.~
just sounds good.

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