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Art Critique Joamette Gil - Friday, November 23, 2007 - 17:57

Please offer some constructive criticism to the following deviations, either in this thread or on DA - whichever you prefer.

Thanks, m'darlins. :)

Note: Since MP won't cooperate, I can't give you specific links. The deviations are the first 6 in my DA gallery, the link to which may be found in the comment below.

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Joamette Gil; Friday, November 23, 2007 - 17:58

http://nameofchoice.deviantart.com/gallery

Edit: HA! I can still post links in replies! Take THAT Apache Server!!! xD

*ahem* But yes... criticism, por favor. :3

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I tried, but nothing came

Vikingr; Friday, November 23, 2007 - 18:11

I tried, but nothing came up! If you've been doing invisible art, Joey, it sucks. If you haven't, tho, then my PC sucks and i'll ofer my 2 cents worth when it's fixed...

日本語! 楽しいよ!

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Meh! It comes up when I

Joamette Gil; Friday, November 23, 2007 - 18:52

Meh! It comes up when I click the link...!

DAMN YOOOOU TECHNOLOGYYYYYY!!!!!!! Dx

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You call that Bad

WaterFaerie; Saturday, November 24, 2007 - 01:14

You call that Bad Art?!

Joey, you rawk!

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WaterFaerie wrote:You call

Joamette Gil; Monday, November 26, 2007 - 20:12

WaterFaerie wrote:
You call that Bad Art?!

Joey, you rawk!

Thank you, WF, but I'd rawk even harder with some rawkin' critiques from my rawkin' Punkers. 9_9

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can someone please explain

Vikingr; Monday, November 26, 2007 - 22:43

can someone please explain to the ignorant one what exactly rawking would be?

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either way, these drawins

Vikingr; Monday, November 26, 2007 - 22:46

either way, these drawins are great! Especially the charcoal ones, very impressive shading. I can't use charcoal, I always make a mess... -_-

Kudos!

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lol! It's just a quirky

Joamette Gil; Monday, November 26, 2007 - 23:50

lol! It's just a quirky misspelling of "rockin'" as in "awesome" or "cool."

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Heh. You should see my face

Joamette Gil; Monday, November 26, 2007 - 23:51

Heh. You should see my face and clothing after I've finished drawing with charcoal. I look like a miner. x3

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Yeah, they're awesome

Look Its Nichole; Tuesday, November 27, 2007 - 02:33

Yeah, they're awesome Joey...I really can't find anything wrong because this is like so far above my level. If I see anything strange I'll tell you though.

The people should not be afraid of it's government. The government should be afraid of it's people. -V

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Dude, I don't think I can do

Dungionman 3; Tuesday, November 27, 2007 - 14:40

Dude, I don't think I can do as good as that!

People in stone houses should not throw glass.

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Carolyn wrote:Dude, I don't

Joamette Gil; Tuesday, November 27, 2007 - 20:08

Carolyn wrote:
Dude, I don't think I can do as good as that!

I didn't think I could either. Then I tried - and I did! Which is how I know I could do better. :) You can become as good as you want, Carolyn.

I'd appreciate that, Nichole. ;)

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Quote:Heh. You should see my

Vikingr; Wednesday, November 28, 2007 - 18:37

Quote:
Heh. You should see my face and clothing after I've finished drawing with charcoal. I look like a miner

That's not where my mess goes... The page is a state when i'm done, it's just smudges. Like a toddler's finger-paintings!

:)

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Vikingr wrote:Like a

Joamette Gil; Wednesday, November 28, 2007 - 23:44

Vikingr wrote:
Like a toddler's finger-paintings!

LMAO! I think accomplishing that with charcoal may be a talent in and of itself. x3

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Yeah, when I use charcoal I

Look Its Nichole; Thursday, November 29, 2007 - 01:39

Yeah, when I use charcoal I can't possibly keep the drawing look like it should.

The people should not be afraid of it's government. The government should be afraid of it's people. -V

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I can,

Vikingr; Thursday, November 29, 2007 - 14:30

I can, but only if i was going for the "black page" effect! ;)

日本語! 楽しいよ!

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