First I'd say you have a good use of color and use it to make some creative looks in the graphic design of your pics. That said, I think maybe such tools (like coloring on the PC) my be a crutch for you.

When you see the underlying original pencils, they're weaker and unsure. Like on the first picture, you do a good job of using a sketchy pencil style for part of the pic, but then parts of it don't nearly have the same strength (like the nose and the mouth). Same with the second picture. You do this cool crazy background but then figure suffers for lack of detail and attention.

I guess what I'm trying to say is that your work shows that you have a great creative spark, but you need to focus more on your basics to make a stronger picture overall. So instead of focusing on coloring and backgrounds, you need to focus more on your basic linework.

I'd also suggest to look into inking techniques to help make your linework stronger. On the second picture it's obvious you colored straight over pencils and with the hair being a large patch of solid black, it makes the lines seems that much muted.

Mind you this is all positive because you do have a style going on, I just think you need to work on the foundations of your art some to make it better. I know that may sound a bit cliche, but sometimes there are truths in cliches.

Thank you so much everything that you wrote is compitly right, and I am pretty much aware of the stuff you pointed out but anyway...I am glad you took the time to tell me all these things they where rly helpefull so yeah....I am pretty much happy about it :3

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the one of your boyfriend is realy lookin sweet ^.^

heh thank you ^^ (althgo I didnt showed to him yet >.>)

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lol ^_^

could you do me a favor and check out my blog if ur into reading and critique.

They're cool, but I really think some anatomy study might not hurt. I don't want you to think I'm being harsh, but the mouths don't look like mouths. Also, on the one of the guy, the one eye is much bigger than the other, they aren't proportional.

Hope this helps.

The people should not be afraid of it's government. The government should be afraid of it's people. -V

Also the girl needs some curves, even the most straight-up-and-down girl I know has more curves than than. Also there's something funky about the left shoulder (our left, her right).

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the head should be 3/4 view thats why one eyes ia smaller althgo I know it dosent look right oh and always have problem drawing the mouth so yeah I am aweare of all that x3 AND NO YOU ARE NOT HARSH CAUSE EVERY COMMENT is appreceated :3 about the girl....more cruves?..O.o...I am happy about the body I darw at her so I think it dosent need more cruves but that my opinion but I also respeck yours :3

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Your anatomy is a bit out of wack as well as your lines but I admire your freeform graphics. I can never get free form shapes and such right but congratulations, you have captured it.

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Because I didn't want to nit-pick (I still don't but I have nothing else to say and I want to stay in this conversation ha ha ha), but you should try to make the skull fit onto the fabric of the shirt, not over it. Like now its like sitting on its own layer above the shirt, if you understand what i'm trying to say.

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I know it's three quarter view, but even so, the eyes aren't proportional.

The people should not be afraid of it's government. The government should be afraid of it's people. -V

haha so now the problem is the fabric of the shirt XD kidding...lol I kinda understand what you said...
and yeah I know they arent proportinal I mention that in my previous post so there was no need to repeat yourself x3 !!!!

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It sits over it, is what I'm trying to say

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I know what'cha mean Plant. The skull appears to be floating above the shirt, rather than sitting on it.

The people should not be afraid of it's government. The government should be afraid of it's people. -V

I think that the way she put the skull over the shirt is purely artistic more than realistic. It looks fine in that respect.

thank you ^^ I was just trueing to draw it different from my usuall but oh well..someone understand that as a mistake but still..I am gratefull..maybe its a mistake but if I look at that at my drawng then all of them are full of mistakes X3

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I screw up drawing the head again and again until I get so frustrated I con't concentrate. But every now and then I'll slip up and get it right!

I have a tendency to wear my mind on my sleeve, I have a history of losing my shirt...