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Art Critique WaterFaerie - Saturday, December 29, 2007 - 01:13

Please critique! This was from a doodle that I liked, so I made it bigger and better. I was originally fooling around with the hair. :P

Thank you!

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I am just going to put

Look Its Nichole; Saturday, December 29, 2007 - 04:41

I am just going to put things in a list for ease of understanding and typing.

The eye that is on the left is tilted to far upward, it needs to be more in like with the other one.

The mouth is not in the center of the face, it should be under the nose.

The line that makes up the nose extends much to far into her forehead.

The head is shaped a bit strange.

I hope I didn't come off harsh, because you did ask for critique.

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Don't worry. Thank you.

WaterFaerie; Saturday, December 29, 2007 - 18:32

Don't worry. Thank you.

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It is a good pic, though the

Reiko Kitsune; Monday, December 31, 2007 - 04:42

It is a good pic, though the hair could use some highlights to go with the ones in the eyes, and the ear is nice were it curves up into the point, but the part closer to were the earring is, it seems a little misshapen, as if its stretched out. I hope I'm making sense.

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Fwee posting!

furubafan3; Saturday, January 19, 2008 - 00:55

I really like the hair, but I think her head is a tad too big for her body. ^^; (Unless this was done on purpose) I make this mistake alot too. Also if you want to draw big eyes don't be afraid of experimenting with lighting. Large anime eyes tend to be shiney.

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