I am just going to put things in a list for ease of understanding and typing.

The eye that is on the left is tilted to far upward, it needs to be more in like with the other one.

The mouth is not in the center of the face, it should be under the nose.

The line that makes up the nose extends much to far into her forehead.

The head is shaped a bit strange.

I hope I didn't come off harsh, because you did ask for critique.

The people should not be afraid of it's government. The government should be afraid of it's people. -V

Don't worry. Thank you.

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It is a good pic, though the hair could use some highlights to go with the ones in the eyes, and the ear is nice were it curves up into the point, but the part closer to were the earring is, it seems a little misshapen, as if its stretched out. I hope I'm making sense.

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I've never has a heart, Never know love.

Yet you expect me to care, to care about you.

Now you're staring at me, You stare at me as your love fades to grey.

What did you expect, Did you expectg me to love, love you with a heart I've never had?

I really like the hair, but I think her head is a tad too big for her body. ^^; (Unless this was done on purpose) I make this mistake alot too. Also if you want to draw big eyes don't be afraid of experimenting with lighting. Large anime eyes tend to be shiney.

Show me a person who has never made a mistake, and I'll show you somebody who has never acheived much-Joan Collins