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Of course!Good luck!

日本語! 楽しいよ！

I'm ready when you are! *salutes valiently*

"Amor, amor, nada hay peor ni mejor" -proverbio

Lets do this! *grabs headband and roles up sleeve*

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24 pages in 4 weeks... that's a page a day every day excepting Sundays. Good luck!

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I live under a bridge.

That's pretty much what's gone on so far, but I'm going to have to step up my pace significantly: these pages need to be partially achromatic and partially colored. Plus I need to print it.

By the way, I should be posting what I've got so far up tomorrow! Thanks for responding, you guys!

Alright, guys. I'm having issues with the scanners on campus, so upload the pages is going to take a little longer than I expected. Here are a couple of samples, though, just to give you guys an idea of the general style. They're really bad quality because I had to rape them with auto-contrast to make the blue linework visible online (the originals are NOT dirty, as these appear to be :P). Also, only sections of them were scanned for use in a design project I was working on, which would explain the printer issue: the damn things are too small! =/

Page 2

Page 5

I like two page a lot and I hope your not adding words to it because it really captures the kid's emotions.

Page five is a little to blurry, but it might just be the scan. I also don't really get whats going on in it however, that might be because I haven't seen the prior pages.

"Amor, amor, nada hay peor ni mejor" -proverbio

Thanks for the comments, Ren!

I don't remember if I mentioned it earlier or not, but this entire comic is going to be done without words. Just straight-up pictures telling a story.

And yeah, page 5 would make a helluva lot more sense if you could see the prior ones (ah, and it's all blurry because of an effect I was messin' around with... and silly Joey clicked on "Save" instead of "Save As" ...so ashamed...). He's basically a class show-off. After going to school and being his usual know-it-all self, the teacher starts passing back they're exam papers. He gets an A and decides to brag to the girl behind him about it; she simply flips him off.

That is so good! Go, Joey, go!!

It portrays emotions and actions perfectly. I can't really tell if anything needs to be fixed, though, because it's all blurry on my end. Otherwise, I enjoy and understand the story thus far.

Good luck!

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.:"No time for goodbyes," he said, as he faded away. "It's hard to imagine, but one day you'll end up like me." Then he said, "If you want to stay alive, hold on for your life.":.

on page five I don't think you really need the three box's of the hand putting or picking up the paper. One would be good. To give the idea or put anther hand to give more of the idea that he or she is handing it off to the guy.

If your trying to give the idea that hes handing off the paper to the teacher do one box him handing it to him and the second box same but with the letter grade on the paper you can do that with out having to use three box's which make it to long.

but thats my option on that really its the only thing that is really bothering me the most.

other then that work hard! *little guts*

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Looks good to me. It's a hell of a lot better than my stuff!

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Still having issues with the scanner, guys. Just thought I'd let you know what's up: I'm currently penciling page 16 of 24, and 3 of the other 15 have been inked (on a day when I was in an inking as opposed to a drawing mood). I have 1 week left - gotta step up the pace!

After making some cuts here and there (mostly just panels that weren't entirely necessary), the story is now 21 pages long as opposed to 24.

All 21 have been penciled.

Page 4 of 21 is currently being inked.

I have 3 days left (plus homework to do).

Wish me luck (I'm going to need it)!!

Thats why its always good to do like small page layouts before draw out the large sizes. so you can see the layout cut out whats not need and see if you need to add more of make boxes bigger so you can make more pages or less. you can check out the draft I did on "Kurenai Ichi Untitled - Manga- Love/ Horror/ Fantasy" its really only for you to understand whats needed or not. some are really detailed and others are very simple.

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I'd wish you luck but you really don't need it! I know you'll manage to get it done and looking fabulous!

"Amor, amor, nada hay peor ni mejor" -proverbio

I saw those already - I think you did a really good job! Anyway, I appreciate the advice, but that's is what I always do when planning a comic. The cuts were made to the thumnbnails, not pages I'd already taken the time to draw only to realize it was too much. I'm certainly not new to this game. ;)

Thank you, Ren! ^_^ Actually, the heavens smiled down on me yesterday - my professor decided to extend the deadline to this Tuesday. Six more days for comicking (now I can actually sleep this week)!

Sweetness! Well go luck! are you planning on posting the pages up?
I would love to read it! *puppy eyes*

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Yes, totally! Once it's all done, I'm going to syndicate it as a weekly webcomic. ;)

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Alright, here's the deal.

All 21 pages have been penciled AND inked. The coloring has only just begun. Due to time issues, I was forced to present my comic to the class before it was finished; but even so I received outstanding marks simply for how well conceived it was and how much the whole class enjoyed it (score).

That being said, I'm torn between doing two things: 1) continuing the coloring at a more leisurely pace now that the course deadline isn't an issue or 2) make a commitment to color 1 page every week for the next 6 months or so and post each page up as a weekly comic as I go along.

Comments? Suggestions?

Where are my comments/suggestons, lovelies? =(

Oh guys. You are making Joey sad.

sorry... got a lot of work and still being worked...needs a break!XP

Whats up? hope its going well.^^;

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